This is sooo well written and the story! Lordy. One of best things I have read here on Substack. I am excited to read more of this story and others of yours. Honestly good, good stuff. I felt like I was there watching this story like a movie. Bravo Lawrence W.
Unconsciously not subconsciously - beautifully written, perhaps too much back story for an early chapter. Well done, can't wait to read the next Jake chapter
This is sooo well written and the story! Lordy. One of best things I have read here on Substack. I am excited to read more of this story and others of yours. Honestly good, good stuff. I felt like I was there watching this story like a movie. Bravo Lawrence W.
Thank you, Jeanne! This means so much to me. What a magnificent compliment. ❤️
write more about boners and throbbing 🤣💕
Unconsciously not subconsciously - beautifully written, perhaps too much back story for an early chapter. Well done, can't wait to read the next Jake chapter